I am delighted to discuss the topic of this week—poetry—because I have great interest in poems. In my blog writing two, I share a poem about love. Today, I come up with another interesting idea and like to share it with all of you.
The following is a poem that was written by me before I came to Singapore. I have shared it with my university classmates. (HIT-Harbin Institute of Technology)
Coming to HIT is an accident
your encouraging words make me confident
All can be discouraged
everyone cries
but I have friends to comfort me
All can be broke
everything disappear
but I have friends to support me
Friends are noble at heart
never be apart
I know you are always
trust me, believe me and with me
The friendship between us
I will treasure forever!
Now, I come up with another part of my poem.
(RDFZ stands for the high school affiliated to RenMin university)
(RDFZ stands for the high school affiliated to RenMin university)
I grow older and older; the dream seems to be further and further
Beijing, Harbin, Singapore; RDFZ, HIT, NUS
Full of surprise
Why so much surprise in my life? Why so many tough experiences in my life?
I get confused, I exclaim; but now, I understand
Not because I am unlucky; but I am destined
to experience them; to know these best friends; to fight for success with all of you
Friends, strive for success with me, and time will quickly pass by
Friends, believe in fraternity with me, and anxiety will totally go by
Wait, expect, and experience.
Friends, let us strive for success together
Friends, I will be back soon.
You know. I won’t lie.
(Life continues, so the poem is continuous …)
Compared to the Lihua style poem I have written in my blog, your poem is absolutely better than that.
ReplyDeleteWhat I like most of your blog is the final sentence, poem will be continuous as long as life is going on. It makes me enthusiastic to make a better life poem!
"It makes me enthusiatic to make a better life poem." I cannot agree with you more. I consider that our life is just like the poem, full of emotions. By the way, you are always humble; I think the poem which you wrote in class yesterday is meaningful. I appreciate it and I also want to learn more about the LiHua's style in your blog. Thanks.
DeleteI admire you for your bravery and determination in your peoms. I think we are lucky to experience things we have not predicted. That is life, full of uncertainty and surprise, and we shoule welcome them and enjoy them, to write the life poems of our own.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your support and I will try my best. Yeah, it is our own special life and we can also enjoy it.
DeleteGood poems about friendship. Your poems are all written from heart. I really appreciate them. They remind me of the importance of friends and my life in the university.
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ReplyDeleteYou are really talented at writting poetry. These two poems both praise friendship,which is the most important thing in our life. Your poems also recall me of my dear friends and the time we spent together.
ReplyDeleteYou are a really nice person who attach the importance of friendship!! I saw your emotion in every words. These two poems touched me a lot and remind me of my friends in China, U.S, Canada. They always support me and comfort me when I struggled in my tough time!
ReplyDeleteThanks~Let treasure the friendship and strive for our future. We can support each other in the current time, haha.
DeleteI am very surpriesd that you are very interested in poetry, for it is a so rare habit to appreciate poetry nowadays. Your poems are well written to express your attention to true friendship. I agree with you that all the tough experiences are what we need to be gone through in our life. And at last, we will be back home successfully!
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