Friday, 11 May 2012

Poem- You are beautiful

This week's theme is poetry. To be honest, I have no deep perception in poems and never see the profound meaning of the poems. So I gave up writing any analysis of poem or poetry, instead, I wrote a poem by myself and hope this poem will recall the beautiful memories of you guys. Although it is a short poem, it took me more than one hour to compose it. Sincerely hope you will like it.



You are beautiful

Brightly and briskly
you come into my eyes
then into my dreams
With your crescent smile
and your gleaming teeth
You stand there
giggling and beaming
Your jet black hair flaps in the wind
like the seaweed waves in the sea
Your eyes blink
as the brightest star
and your full lips
glassy as red cherry
making me wanna have a bite
Flush emerges on your face
then fades away
I stand here
gazing and staring at you furtively
without your consciousness
Lovely and elegantly
you are the angel from the heaven
The arrow of the Cupid
shoots my heart right away
without giving me chance to be aware
I hope that one day
I can stand beside you
whispering in your ear
“Hey girl
you are beautiful”

6 comments:

  1. Wow!!!!!Beautiful poem and "beautiful girl." I am interested in this poem and have a crucial question: Do you have a girl like what you wrote in your blog in the real life? Haha.

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    1. I guess he has one, or else he could not have so profound understanding.

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  2. Just like a love letter and I think if it is, it will move that girl. It is really a nice poem and I hope everyone can recall their own stories.

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  3. I can understand you. Good poem!

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  4. I think it is a good poem. Maybe you have the talent and can write more good poems in the future.

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  5. I can understand exactly how you feel when you saw the girl. Your poem is very nice, but still not enough to express how beautiful she is in your eyes. Actually, no poem can do this job. Buddy, good luck.

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